| | Started writing about the first dynasty of Temire, you know, the country in my story Willing Tool? Ok...you don't know. Umm, anyway, here is a sneak peak at one of the scenes. 
An illustration from my story. Left: Tao Fan'hi (the older one). Right: Riun Sichuu (the younger one).
When the broadsword hit the cold ground, glittering cobalt under the blue skies, Fan’hi stepped forward, not to Sichuu’s side, not to raise a kick. The spear that was supposed to be out of reach thrust through the older man’s right chest. A jet of blood spurted backwards, tainting the ice crystals that flew up when the sword landed. It was a flaming colour in the world of blue and white. It burnt through the young Riun’s retinas.
The red cloud in Sichuu’s vision cleared, along with his confusion.
Warm as the blood, Fan’hi’s hand found itself on Sichuu’s shoulder one last time, supporting the kneeling priest from collapsing. His proud smile returned to his face. It made the young man realize how their friendship had not been a lie.
“Your future is more important, for your brother is still alive, waiting for you to come to him…” ~青月レン aka Dexterity |
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